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Post by the_who on Dec 18, 2006 13:27:22 GMT -5
tadah, my version of a poem. sorry if it is horrible. Falling Without Wings I'm falling without wings. I look around this town I spin then i look down. What has happened to the things That made me stand tall? I saw a reflection that didn't look like mine I starred at this stranger for a long time. Where have i gone? Is this pool making an illusion? I wish that everything would again be clear, I beg that the reasons for every single tear Would just fade away. Wish you would hold me tight. Guess I've just never won a fight, Or ever managed to set off in flight. Eveything is changing And I can't slow down. My dreams are dieing, And I'm left crying. I can't stand tall anymore. I'm just falling without wings. Wish you would catch me, Screamin is hurting me you see. Wish I weren't just falling without wings. do you like it? Please put in some input!!! If it sounds too goth/emo to you, don't even bother. We all have those days......
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Post by racist on Apr 1, 2007 12:25:04 GMT -5
ello poem person, its pretty good mate. but you should make a happy poem next time
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Post by the_who on Apr 1, 2007 15:38:04 GMT -5
i like emo poems. they disturb people. ;D
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Post by racist on Apr 1, 2007 19:29:59 GMT -5
*cough* yes they *cough* do *cough* *cough*
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Post by the_who on Apr 2, 2007 19:36:27 GMT -5
*sigh* what eva......
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Post by aznpride6294 on Apr 3, 2007 11:15:10 GMT -5
haha ill post ryans poem in a second
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Post by the_who on Apr 3, 2007 16:02:43 GMT -5
0.o ryan has a poem? i'm scarred....... lol
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Post by aznpride6294 on Apr 10, 2007 20:48:47 GMT -5
its the one we had to write for Mrs.B's class the apology poem
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Post by the_who on Apr 12, 2007 14:01:00 GMT -5
what'd he write about?
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Post by aznpride6294 on Apr 12, 2007 17:49:03 GMT -5
hahaha stuff
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Post by the_who on Apr 15, 2007 14:01:18 GMT -5
i'm scarred.......
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Post by racist on Jul 2, 2007 13:49:02 GMT -5
you should be, it scared me <<;
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Post by the_who on Jul 10, 2007 16:02:30 GMT -5
well, i'm off to make toast out of corn syrup!
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Post by chaos on Sept 26, 2008 21:51:11 GMT -5
Awe Don't change your style Emo poems are amazing. XD
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Post by the_who on Sept 26, 2008 22:31:21 GMT -5
yes, and so are poems you think are emo at first then turn out to be adorable.
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Post by chaos on Sept 26, 2008 23:10:48 GMT -5
True this one is just beautiful for a while it made me think of the rabbit hole story. then about ZADR I'm weird huh?
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Post by the_who on Sept 26, 2008 23:15:01 GMT -5
Eh, not so much. I don't see this relating to any pairings, really. But maybe that's cause this has to do with my actual life.
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Post by chaos on Sept 26, 2008 23:20:18 GMT -5
and I don't see the relationship there because I know not your life anyway that was just what i was thinking about when I read it.
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Post by the_who on Sept 26, 2008 23:31:20 GMT -5
yeah, i can understand that. Honestly, though, it's got nothing to do with romance.
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Post by chaos on Sept 27, 2008 16:24:01 GMT -5
... uh ah what ever. XD
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